May Theme: Conventions
For the first half of 2011, I will take time to focus on picture books that you can use with each of the Six Traits of Writing. Each month will be dedicated to a new trait.
December 2010 – Ideas
January 2011 – Organization
February 2011 – Voice
March 2011 – Word Choice
April 2011 – Sentence Fluency
This month’s theme is Conventions. What would a copy editor need to do to prepare the piece for publication?
Recommended Grades: 3-5
Eats, Shoots & Leaves: Why, Commas Really Do Make a Difference! is part of a series of books on conventions. This particular book is specifically about the use of commas and how commas change meaning depending on their placement in a sentence. A fun read that will often make kids laugh out loud.
Lesson idea: Read aloud this book and discuss the use and placement of commas. Model how to determine where to put a comma in several sentences that you provide. Have students write their own set of sentences that need a comma. Have them switch with a partner and edit the sentences for commas. Have students independently write and illustrate sentence pairs moving the comma to change the meaning. Compile all student sentence pairs into a class book to place in your writing center as a resource for editing.
**Note** I provide these lesson ideas under the assumption that you are familiar with The Six Traits of Writing. If you are not, and would like more information on teaching students about sentence fluency or any other six traits component, please feel free to contact me at Dlittle[at]linkstoliteracy[dot]com. I am happy to provide more specific lessons or resources if necessary.
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